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why is it that whenever something is looking up
you must bring it

                                    back
                                           down?

you're the unbearable weight
         on all of our shoulders

                                           please,
                                           let us go
i'm progressively having more fun with these

EDIT: fucked around with the formatting. i never do that. thoughts? is it distracting? helpful hints?
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Lady-Yume's avatar
Beautifully done - both the imagery as the formatting; it makes the words float :heart: